goodbye dear

Goodbye
When you said goodbye
I thought I shed tears which
Filled pails and pails
But they looked red and blue
Red was blood shed
From my bruised broken heart
Blue was ink to write
About my love eternal for u
Now I no longer shed tears
As all water as in a desert has
Evaporated ,no oasis too
Its on fire ,my life, my
Heart ,my soul –come
look at the agony I am in ?
LONLINESS
Grips my heart
Like a screw in a vice;
My heart, my life is bitter, heavy,
Its weary step of condemned Criminal to the scaffold.
Meaningless, futile life is
Akin to dust in a dessert.
Misery, the life should end
Like dead butterfly’s wing,
My soul no more can sing
Come oh! Death , mercy you send.
THe above two poems can dampen your spirit so here is a psotscript --
but life is full of surprises -have a beautiful day.
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Yes separation
is very painful, very well expressed, Padmini !
A Great presentation of 26
A Great presentation of 26 alphabets, which in turn a great poem. But I want to say that don't say goodbye.
OPSINGH
It is difficult to bear separation Padmini
Heart-touching poems. When our loved one is with us it is a bliss, when he or she is away it is like hell.
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Nice poem Padmini
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Life is cruel Padmini, but never let it get you down...
fate dealt you a cruel blow, me too but don't think too much about it and let it get you down. There are these moments of private sorrow but with every passing day is a day closer to that great rejoicing... have faith, live life and remember he still lives on in your son.
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Thanks,
rakhi.
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