Tragedy of Rain (My Poem)

Rain,
You are hugged in the breast of vast sky,
When conflict arises between you and the the sky,
You sheds tears parting the sky in an elegy of the poet.
Have you ever seen
Than the sky dissolves in the ocean
Through your separation?
Eco of exultation sounds in the heart of ocean,
Ocean wears the blue sharee larger than the sky
Ornating its coiffure by the white flowers.
Rain,
Ocean mingles with the sky by your departure,
That it comes from the drops of your eyes.
Alas!Rain,
You couldn't defeat the ocean and win the sky,
You couldn't inform the sky that only you're the beloved of the sky.
You've died lending your drops of water
Making the ocean to be loved in the breast of your sky.
Note:Here ocean and rain are compared to two women of imagination and the sky is a homeless man.Look at the sky when it rains it looks like an ocean as if the ocean is above in the sky transferring from the Earth.
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A fine poem, full of imagery and imagination. Thanks to this. Ed here!
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well it is fine
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Husna, a Good one after a long gap.....
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Husna the poem is really superb.It touches my heart very deep.The melancholy produced by the poem is so great.we want more such good poems.keep on writing.....
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I wish to write more poems for the people of This Earth.Pray for me.
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such a good post after a long time. Keep writing.
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nice poem
keep writing truely inspirational.
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I will write for all of you.
Inspirational poem Husna,
I like it and your comparison.
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Certainly I will visit your blog and make comments in my limited time.I wish to chat with you.The life of human beings are the essence of my writing.Pray for me so that I can make time to write more that will reach people's soul.
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