A demon in love
Your wings
Tinted in gold smothering me
Giving enough reason
To retract my fangs
Your golden halo
Drove me to tears
How could i fall in love
When i should've killed you
I could be your anything
I could be what you want
I could even take your shape
But would you love me
For what i really am.
Will there be forgiveness
Will there be redemption
for these wretched soul
for all the souls i damned
Will this unforbidden love
prevail over the rules
set in stones since the
first of the seven days.
I wish i could be you.
I can only take your shape
the wings, the halo
and the perfect designs.
Inside
i'm forever damned.
I could never be you
could never love
could never be an angel.
Hi'yall. Thisis a poem i've made a few years ago, when an intersting senario just sort of popped into my head. It's what a demon's minion would feel if he saws an angel so beautiful that he atually fell in love with her. This actually lead me to write a short story that goes with the poem, though the subject characters has been changed to a succubi and a saint. I might posted that story here if it's alright and deemed appropriate. Please comment, as i would accept all your criticism and comments. Thank you.
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