My Dream Girl
Chapter 2
One day i'm lie down again in that place starting to see the stars With a different shapes and points,sparkling at all times.At a moment i close my eyes and turning straight to the house of the girl.I opened my eyes to see the house.
When i see the house her too.It was the girl that i saw in a last time.I hurried to get up run going to her.She waves her hand and smiling at me again.I'm here in front of her.
I get a deep breathing and i say with her."Hi!"she replied "hello!".I talk to her and ask her name."Can i know your name?"She replied "I'm EDel"Then i said to her "I'm happy and glad to met you,can you be my friend?"
She replied "Yes! why not?"Then after in all of that she's my friend in a long time.But I don't told her about my feelings with her.
In a while she's to be my girlfriend.I don't know for how i got her as a girlfriend.Besides i did'nt told her my feelings.
I just surprise when i was awakened she is behind at me.Lying her head on my right arms While i was asleep.I was see her tame face and looking at me.
I ask with her,What are you doing in here behind of me?She replied,"I'm here for you,i'm fallen for you".
I was surprisingly her voice and feeling for me.At that time i don't know on what to do.In inside of my heart i feel happy.
I have no choice to keep my feelings with her too.I convert my strength to told her that inlove with her in long time ago.But i keep it unitl you came back in your gone days.
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I liked your post but it had many grammatical and spelling mistakes which spoiled my reading of the post....be careful!
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